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It's an Eye. by PuccaNoodles2009 It's an Eye. by PuccaNoodles2009
Just a kinda test to see if I can draw realistically
ugh. So difficult. Aurgh. The lid needs some work. Def.

I'M LACKING SHADING. ALL THE SHADING. FFFF.
AND EVERYTHING IS TOO HARSH AND SCRATCHY WHHHHYYYYY D:

Please critique xD Just .. please. I reaaalllyyyy need to improve
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Critique by TerrariaStarKnight Jul 7, 2012, 12:40:53 AM
BY SIR SNICKERDOODLE (CEO of Snickerdoodle Arts)
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To start out, this piece looks great and I am not Star Knight (everything I say is legitimate and serious).
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This piece captures the realistic tone of a real eye in several ways:
1. The shine and shading portray a three-D. effect accurately, the slight roughness of the shading adds artist personality in a way.
2. The exquisite detail in with the eye corner, iris, eye lashes, and eye lid shows that you put full thought and effort into this piece.
3. Vision; I guess I would say something that equals as Star Knight would say, "Mighty Fine;" this was well made and the shading was made very professionally.
4. Technique; Nothing was made wrong, pictures like this don't seem to have a personal touch, but yours has a bit.
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Anyway, great work and we all look forward to the privilage of seeing more art from you in the future.
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it had to stare for that creepy sight,and it looks make with pencil and paper,but it did't creepy for us,at least :D

and i hope it had some color,black and white is not a best color anyway.

you did a great work,it will better drawing,for you.... you can make better then super artist in deviantart,in the champions,even in the world :D

it will be win all of the contests,cause you are the best artist in the world

i hope you will be popular,even all of artist will fav and watch on you

good luck,your art are the best!

-TSW,we productions
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thami67 Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
OMFG! I wish i could do that! WWWWWWWWWWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
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omnipotentmiku Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Woah, that looks really good. I dunno how to help you improve, though, since I'm only just grasping realism as well.
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PuccaNoodles2009 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Haha thank you very much!
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omnipotentmiku Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
No probs~
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sydnerella Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2012   Writer
This is really good!! Eyes are one of my favorite things to draw (not that I draw much haha).

Nice job!
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PuccaNoodles2009 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thank you very much! :)
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NeglectedCookie Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2012
Is it now? Anyways just like cmc said you should stop critisizing yourself that much (anyways how I see it your being a hatur)Im not really good at anything that has to do with art but I still think this is an eye:fusionrock:...lolwuts?
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cmcdonald1337 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012
You're not giving yourself enough credit, this style is very striking, but if you want it to be smoother be sure to use a blender. That will solve a lot of shading problems. also, try to use longer, more controlled lines, that will make the drawing look less harsh overall. well done, though!
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PuccaNoodles2009 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Ah thank you very much for the suggestions! I have some blenders some where and I should really get into the habit of using them xD
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500Fsh Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012   General Artist
hey, better than me
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